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The Plot Disscusion
« Thread Started on Mar 1, 2008, 12:15am »

A Snowclan medicine- cat gets a prophecy that says that there will be blood and many lost lives. Then, PolarStar and another warrior go up to Mountain's Peak to dream with StarClan. Unfortunetly, Mistkit follows the leader and falls in the snow near IceClan's camp. There is a blizzard that night, and he is stuck in the snow and his scent is washed away. A night patrol goes out into the blizzard because the medicine cat of IceClan had a dream of a kit in the snow. The kit is found and revived back in IceClan's camp, but the kit doesn't remember anything. So IceClan keeps it as their own.

Back to Polarstar at Mountain's Peak. Polarstar is sleeping with StarClan when the cat that is about to explain what the prophecy means something strange happens. In the blizzard, Polarstar and his friend rush back to the camp and arrives to find the kit's mother panicking. SnowClan sends a patrol out to find the kit but fails to find the scent, so they decide to start again in the morning.

In the morning, a search party is sent out to find the kit. Luckily the kit had a cut so there was a trail that lead into IceClan's territory and then stopped. Around the place that it stopped they noticed many IceClan scents so they feel that IceClan kidnapped the kit. They rush back to camp and tell Polarstar. Polarstar leads an attack party to IceClan's camp. IceClan surrenders the kit, but SnowClan doesn't take fondly to it. There is a huge fight over the kit but SnowClan ends up keeping the kit and going back to camp with only a few scrapes and bruises.

Now on the bottom of the mountain, they are having their own problems. There are two DewClan warriors and two RockClan warriors that are planning to assassinate the to leaders. They four work together to try to eliminate the leaders one by one. In both cases they fail so they run off to SnowClan's territory to assassinate Polarstar. They make it into the camp and notice a kit playing. They run and steal the very same kit that was kidnapped before. When SnowClan notices this they are furious and Polarstar sends a attack party over to IceClan's camp.

Back in IceClan's camp, an IceClan apprentice's eyes have been clawed and the accuse SnowClan. The apprentice is now blind, so they send an attack party. Mistkit is still gone. What does that mean? All we know is the fights will continue. Large and small. Will there ever be peace? According to the prophecy. IT WILL RAIN BLOOD!

((Please feel free to discuss and change any of this. I feel that we either need more with Dew and Rock and more in general. Any suggestions?))

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Re: The Plot Disscusion
« Reply #1 on Apr 14, 2008, 10:17pm »

Please people. Input is needed, and it would be completely fine if someone comes up of a completely new one. We need a plot that is...

-interesting
-involves all clans
-isn't too complicated
-doesn't give the ending away
-Leaves many spots where the outcome could be different. Maybe we could give only parts of the plot away at a time and create the next part depending on the outcome of what happens in that specific part.
-Have members be able to participate in the plot a lot. Should have things like the above.

((Staff- Should we make this into a contest? The person who makes the best plot( or at least a part of the plot) will win an exciting prize. When I say part of a plot I mean if they use my idea of only giving parts of the plot away. We could give the person who thinks up the most exciting beginning to a plot wins a prize and the could maybe gain staff powers where they help us discuss the next part of their plot. What do you guys think? Should this be a contest? Or should we keep this plot and I will make it more exciting and more participation?))

Wow that was long...

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